GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312796 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Final Standings: Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312802 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Yankee Faithful Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Nice recap of Spring Training. Hope you make the right decision with Diaz.. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312806 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312809 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312812 Share on other sites More sharing options...
abc006 Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 pride, power, pintripes... kinda random. and some sentences are a bit out of place, and incorrect gramatically. oh well, looks great. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312817 Share on other sites More sharing options...
turma Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Looking good (Y) my dynasty got frozen merely because I got a lot of things to do this days, university and such. But I might continue it some day. The "problem" with it was my approach, I don't feel like playing A-AAA games, should have put him straight to MLB like you did :whistle: Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312830 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 INKED! Brian Cashman and the Yankees are proud to sign P George Diaz to a 3 year, 300K contract. "Im so blessed, im so proud of myself." George Diaz will head to Tampa, aff. of the the Yankees. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312835 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Yankee Faithful Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 INKED! Brian Cashman and the Yankees are proud to sign P George Diaz to a 3 year, 300K contract. "Im so blessed, im so proud of myself." George Diaz will head to Tampa, aff. of the the Yankees. Ayy deal went through Nice job signing him for cheap. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312839 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 pride, power, pintripes... kinda random. and some sentences are a bit out of place, and incorrect gramatically. oh well, looks great. Thanks everyone for all the positive things I been getting. Also dude what u expect, i been doing this stuff since 10:40AM. lol Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312841 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312846 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Tampa Yankees Pitching Tampa Yankees Batting * Hi-lighted Is The Yankees 2006 Draft Picks Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312852 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 BREAKING NEWS! The Yankees have just released Gary Sheffield from the club. Reporters are saying because of playing time, some just say because the Yankees couldn't fit him in the lineup. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312914 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 This is fairly good dynasty and idea here. Personally, I would just like to see some improved writing. It is amazing the images evocative diction can conjur. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312924 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Excuse my language, but what did you just say? Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312934 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwentySeven Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Excuse my language, but what did you just say? He said that it is easier to get an idea of the action if you use better grammar. As you have it now, your grammar is very poor, and it ends up being hard to read. If you have good grammar, the reader can read without having to try interpret your language. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312937 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Diaz Pumped After His 1st Outing Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312938 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Im sorry for my grammer, this coming from a Freshman. I want to make everything good for the readers and followers. But if you are just going to ask for one little mistake than I don't know how to solve it. ...And please don't say go to Spelling class, because in NY there is no such thing anymore. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312942 Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-Unit Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Nice win there. Hopefully he can move quickly up the ladder to the bigs. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312950 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312962 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Hey guys what do you think about this "Career Mode" it's getting very boring for me. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312977 Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-Unit Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 It's up to you on whether you wanna do it. I like it, maybe if you don't constantly work on it, maybe take it time at a time, it will seem more appealing for you to play through. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312983 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 3, 2006 Author Share Posted October 3, 2006 Your right, it seems boring because I like doing Team dynasty. I felt this would be something new for me. Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-312989 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Yankee Faithful Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Hey guys what do you think about this "Career Mode" it's getting very boring for me. I think it's going well, it's just maybe you should slow it down like DUnit said. You put out a lot of updates today. Maybe put out 1 or 2 updates a day. Take your time so you won't have to hear people complaining about errors on grammar and spelling. But it's your decision. I think you should keep it going.... Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-313008 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GEOLINK Posted October 4, 2006 Author Share Posted October 4, 2006 Ok thanks Dunit and Yankee Faithfull, I will take it slow. I should get some breaks. I work very hard yesterday... since 10:30AM Link to comment https://www.mvpmods.com/forums/topic/24280-the-story-of-george-diaz/page/3/#findComment-313538 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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